Rewrite a paper #2

1) Did not come across convincing declaration as to whether your policy proposal should be identified as a social -OR- economic, foreign -OR- domestic policy;

2) No reference to which approach/method would be applied to rectify concerns [e.g. distributive, redistributive, regulatory; crisis management, strategic, or structural defense];

3) In terms of adoption, I was looking for specific names of elected officials that have authorization to introduce and pass law [i.e. which group of international leaders/heads of State would accept your proposal and work with USA Executives to ensure resources are delivered to desired recipients?];

4) Evaluation- did not come across specific reference to any sort of ‘time-table’ you would recommend law makers to meet with experts to confirm effectiveness of policy application, and consider devoting more/less resources towards programs [i.e. would it be ideal for such meetings to be conducted monthly, quarterly, bi-annually, etc.]; and

5) I would argue the work citations included as part of this file as being ‘incomplete’ (i.e. did not include reference to our course textbook [Lone Star Politics] which lists the policy making process in detail including key phases and associated terms).